French translation………….?

I know it queit long, but can someone translate this into English please?

A mon avis je pense que je suis bien forme et j’ai un sainement diète. Normalement, pour mon petit déjeuner je mange des céréales avec du lait et je boire jus d’orange. Je n‘aime pas mon petit déjeuner, mais c’est plus sainement puis j’utilise pour manger parce que c’est il a plus calcium, vitaminés et minérales qui sont bon pour la santé. Bien que j’aime manger sainement, je mange aussi beaucoup des chocolaté car c’est très délicieux, mais c’est très malsain manger beaucoup, si je ne mange pas souvent. Pourtant, parce que je veux être plus sain, je mangeais plus de fruits et de légumes, car ce sera très bien pour mon corps. Normalement, avant de manger, mon frère et moi nous jouons au football dans le parc pour trente minutes. Nous avons regardé la télévision beaucoup dans la passe, mais maintenant je ne regarde pas la télévision, parce que c’est plus saine faire du sport. Etre plus sain je pense que, il fait faire plus du sport.
Le dernier week-end, j’ai joué plus de sport, puis-je faire normalement, quel est très sain et j’ai trouvé ce plus amusant. Pourtant dans le soir je n’ai mangé pas sainement, j’ai été des frites avec du poison et j’ai bu du coca-cola. Dans le futur j’ai l’intention rester saine, parce que je voudrais être dans bon forme jouer au sport. Je n‘ai pas l’intention de la fumée, parce qu’il est mauvais pour votre cœur et les poumons. Mais je suis allé arrêter jouer des autres sports, parce que je voudrais concentrer en football.

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  • Mikolav

    I have translated this into what you wanted to say and then corrected the mistakes in the French. The capitalised words correspond to the incorrect French and the number after them is the number of the correction at the bottom.

    In my opinion, I think that I am in good shape and I have a healthy diet. Normally I eat cereal with milk for my breakfast and I drink orange juice. I don’t like my breakfast but it is HEALTHIER THAN I USED TO EAT (1) because there is more calcium, vitamins and minerals, which are good for the health. Although I like to eat healthily, I also eat a lot of chocolate because it is very delicious but it is unhealthy IF I EAT IT TOO OFTEN (2). However because I want to be healthier, I WILL EAT MORE (3) fruit and vegetables because that will be very GOOD for my body. Normally before eating, MY BROTHER AND I PLAY FOOTBALL (4) in the park for thirty minutes. We watched television a lot IN THE PAST (5) but now I don’t watch television because it is healthier to do sport. IN ORDER TO BE HEALTHIER, IT IS NECESSARY TO DO MORE SPORT (6). LAST WEEKEND I DID MORE SPORT THAN I DO NORMALLY, WHICH WAS VERY HEALTHY (7). I ATE (8) fish and chips and I drank COCA COLA (9). In the future, I INTEND TO (10) stay healthy because I would like to be IN A GOOD SHAPE TO PLAY SPORT (11). I DON’T INTEND TO SMOKE (12) because it is BAD FOR YOUR HEART (13) and the lungs. ALTHOUGH I WILL PLAY OTHER SPORTS, I PLAY FOOTBALL THE MOST (14).

    (1) plus saine que je mangeais
    (2) si je le mange trop souvent
    (3) je vais manger plus de
    (4) mon frère et moi jouons au foot
    (5) dans le passé
    (6) pour être sain, il faut faire plus de sport
    (7) le weekend dernier, j’ai fait plus de sport que normalment, ce qui était très sain
    (8) j’ai mangé
    (9) coca
    (10) j’ai l’intention de
    (11) en bonne forme pour faire du sport
    (12) je n’ai pas l’intention de fumer
    (13) mauvais pour le coeur
    (14) bien que je jouerai aux autres sports, je jouerai au foot le plus souvent

  • best i could do im not that good at french some parts i couldnt translate well

    With my opinion I think that I am in good form and I have healthy a diet. Normally, for my breakfast I eat cereals with milk and drink orange juice. I do not like my breakfast, but it is more healthy then I use to eat because it is it has more calcium, vitamines and minerals which is good for health. Although I like to eat healthily, I also eat alot of chocolate because they is very delicious, but it is very unhealthy to eat it alot, if I often do not eat. However, because I want to be healthier, I ate more fruits and vegetables, because it will be very well for my body. Normally, before eating, my brother and me we play football in the park for thirty minutes. We looked at television much in the master key, but now I do not look at television, because it is healthier to make sport. To be healthier I think than, it makes make more of the sport. The last weekend, i played more sport, and I played normally, which is very healthy and I found this more amusing. However in the evening I did not eat not healthily, I ate chips and I drank Coke. In the future I intend to remain healthy, because I would like to be in good form to play sport. I do not have any intention of smoking, because it is bad for your heart and the lungs. But I went to stop playing of the other sports, because I would like to concentrate in football

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